Got an urge got a surge
And its out of control
Got an urge I wanna purge
cause Im losing control
Uncontrollable urge
I wanna tell you all about it
Uncontrollable urge
Makes me scream and shout it
Its got style its got class
So strong I cant let it pass
I gotta tell you all about it
I gotta scream and shout it
And I say yeah
MK
Can't put it on Chris site so I put it here.
That is funny. Third time must be a charm. I guess the words I'm saying are hitting home. Somebody keeps erasing my comments. Somebody doesn't like the fact that he isn't good anymore. That Chris has a ego that will be his down fall. Can't take the heat? How come no freedom of speech anymore? I guess they all can't be Leo's.
It is amazing to me that one of the most interesting people I've met can make themselves seem on the web like one of the most boring. It's your blog. Why the personal WebSense?
I know it is difficult to tell from the blog but she really does think deep thoughts. All this superficiality is part of her social mask. While others bleed and whine for their blogs, Potsi seems to prefer dazzling us with the bland and inane.
It's not that she can't write anything interesting because certainly, with her experiences, she can. It's that she doesn't want to commit herself to her writing. She doesn't want to take any chances. She won't expose herself.
After she is done self-editing, this is what you will likely get. Bland, boring, insipid. This blog is not who she is. It's a construct. It's a veneer. It's a fresh coat of paint. Ever see a house built in the 1920s and someone at some point in the time–usually during the 1950s–decided to white wash all the mahogany moldings and mantelpiece? Ever wonder why anyone would want to hide all that rich-dark wood under a coat of bland white paint?
As a writer, to open oneself up also means making oneself vulnerable. The best first-person stories are the most honest and direct. They allow us into a person's life and when a story is good, we see life through their eyes, and if all goes well, we can relate to their experience.
This blogger has experienced all kinds of craziness and excitement. It exists. There actually is a deeper well there. However, she seems to be content to let the world think that she is shallow and without complexity of thought. This simply isn't the case. Not in reality. She just won't take the risk of exposing herself… and the act of playing dumb seems to be some kind of a Southern tradition. Sadly such gentility does not make for very compelling reading. My suggestion is to have some more cobbler and you'll soon forget about it.
So instead of seeing who she really is, we get a homogenized version of life on the prairie. And of course a Devo chorus.
“Southern women have a gentleness of nature but a strength that can hardly be measured.” — Shooting Star, http://shootingstar119.tripod.com/
MK
7 Comments
Anonymous
January 27th, 2005
at 10:58am
I guess anyone can have a blog, nowadays. (sigh)
:: jozjozjoz.com ::
January 27th, 2005
at 11:29am
What are you Ya-ing about, Ponz?!
Anonymous
January 27th, 2005
at 12:43pm
Glad to see your blog entries are getting more intelligent!
Anonymous
January 27th, 2005
at 1:20pm
Got an urge got a surge
And its out of control
Got an urge I wanna purge
cause Im losing control
Uncontrollable urge
I wanna tell you all about it
Uncontrollable urge
Makes me scream and shout it
Its got style its got class
So strong I cant let it pass
I gotta tell you all about it
I gotta scream and shout it
And I say yeah
MK
Anonymous
January 27th, 2005
at 1:43pm
Can't put it on Chris site so I put it here.
That is funny. Third time must be a charm. I guess the words I'm saying are hitting home. Somebody keeps erasing my comments. Somebody doesn't like the fact that he isn't good anymore. That Chris has a ego that will be his down fall. Can't take the heat? How come no freedom of speech anymore? I guess they all can't be Leo's.
Anonymous
January 28th, 2005
at 2:03pm
It is amazing to me that one of the most interesting people I've met can make themselves seem on the web like one of the most boring. It's your blog. Why the personal WebSense?
I know it is difficult to tell from the blog but she really does think deep thoughts. All this superficiality is part of her social mask. While others bleed and whine for their blogs, Potsi seems to prefer dazzling us with the bland and inane.
It's not that she can't write anything interesting because certainly, with her experiences, she can. It's that she doesn't want to commit herself to her writing. She doesn't want to take any chances. She won't expose herself.
After she is done self-editing, this is what you will likely get. Bland, boring, insipid. This blog is not who she is. It's a construct. It's a veneer. It's a fresh coat of paint. Ever see a house built in the 1920s and someone at some point in the time–usually during the 1950s–decided to white wash all the mahogany moldings and mantelpiece? Ever wonder why anyone would want to hide all that rich-dark wood under a coat of bland white paint?
As a writer, to open oneself up also means making oneself vulnerable. The best first-person stories are the most honest and direct. They allow us into a person's life and when a story is good, we see life through their eyes, and if all goes well, we can relate to their experience.
This blogger has experienced all kinds of craziness and excitement. It exists. There actually is a deeper well there. However, she seems to be content to let the world think that she is shallow and without complexity of thought. This simply isn't the case. Not in reality. She just won't take the risk of exposing herself… and the act of playing dumb seems to be some kind of a Southern tradition. Sadly such gentility does not make for very compelling reading. My suggestion is to have some more cobbler and you'll soon forget about it.
So instead of seeing who she really is, we get a homogenized version of life on the prairie. And of course a Devo chorus.
“Southern women have a gentleness of nature but a strength that can hardly be measured.” — Shooting Star, http://shootingstar119.tripod.com/
MK
Cristina
January 29th, 2005
at 12:48pm
Ay, ay ay, ay ay! ;)